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No by ~UncleBrazzie:iconUncleBrazzie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


there can be no remorse
for the likes of you and I
no swerving from this wayward course
no matter how we try

there can be no respite
for the likes of me and you
for all our words are false and trite
even though we mean them true

there can be no redemption
for such two refugees as we
no remorse, no respite, no exemption
from the way we have to be
©2005-2009 ~UncleBrazzie
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Author's Comments

I promised a song in exchange for a glimpse into her soul. I cannot fullfill that bargain to the full letter, but here at least ar the words.

Special thanks to my muse Kassandra, dead for more than a millennium and still a part of me.

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~inter4life Oct 11, 2005, 1:11:24 AM
wow.. that's an amazing poem! i really like it :clap:

--
poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 11, 2005, 2:26:52 AM
Cheerz! Glad you do ;)

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Peter Pan Must Die.
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~glarawen Oct 11, 2005, 8:22:57 AM
Wow. That's really ... wow. I'm all speechless. Thank you soooo much for this. It's absolutely beautiful! :D

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
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~LostHeaven Oct 11, 2005, 10:54:10 AM
A wonderful poem.

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BUG CATCHER SEAN wants to fight!
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 11, 2005, 11:13:55 PM
You have no idea how happy that makes me :D
Thank you m'dear. Thank you...

--
Peter Pan Must Die.
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 11, 2005, 11:21:25 PM
Thanks, my friend. Sorry for abandoning you on MSN this morning, but the walls have eyes today ;)

--
Peter Pan Must Die.
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~LostHeaven Oct 11, 2005, 11:39:03 PM
Not to worry, I understand. ^^

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BUG CATCHER SEAN wants to fight!
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~hatsue-chan Dec 20, 2005, 2:52:58 AM
"for all our words are false and trite
even though we mean them true"

Very powerful idea...and very realistic T_T
I've reread this poem three times now and still can't choose my favourite part. I love it all!
Great work!

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The world wasn't meant for one as beautiful as you...
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~UncleBrazzie Dec 20, 2005, 3:08:55 AM
Glad you don't have an "unfavourite" part :D

--
Peter Pan Must Die.
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