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Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Fixed


But at what price these unshed tears?
these fretful urges
these benevolent sneers
these wasted fears
These sad and somewhat cheerful dirges?

At what price these unspoiled dreams?
These uncut stones
these tepid gleams
these lazy streams
these tired and sunbleached aching bones?

At what price this wicked life?
this random confidential
this endless strife
this fickle knife
this inconsequential potential...
©2005-2009 ~UncleBrazzie
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Author's Comments

is the last in line who has been waiting for his due payment. A wonderful piece of mind did he show me, and I can only be grateful for it.

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~inter4life Oct 17, 2005, 1:25:33 AM
Oh, wow... amazing... this is even nicer! defenatly a fav...

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poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 17, 2005, 1:40:47 AM
Cheerz!

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Peter Pan Must Die.
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~DorianP Oct 17, 2005, 6:19:41 AM
Words say so much more than images. This is brilliant.

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"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.
And the selfsame well from which your laughter rises was oftentimes filled with your tears.
And how else can it be?
The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain. " - Kahlil Gibran
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~glarawen Oct 17, 2005, 9:18:05 AM
Those things can often cost us everything we have, if we let them. Amazing work.

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
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~LostHeaven Oct 17, 2005, 9:44:44 AM
Again, another well done piece.

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BUG CATCHER SEAN wants to fight!
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 17, 2005, 10:51:11 AM
Cheerz mate! Glad you like it...

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Peter Pan Must Die.
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 17, 2005, 10:55:39 AM
Ah but at the same time they are worth the cost...All prices which we pay eventually yield us something...Gebo looks out after us.
Gald you like it ::#1:

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Peter Pan Must Die.
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~UncleBrazzie Oct 17, 2005, 11:01:00 AM
Cheerz mate! :#1:

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Peter Pan Must Die.
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*Etaoin Oct 22, 2005, 4:35:48 AM
I find this eloquent and succinct...I like the rhythym of it

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It is never too late to be what you might have been ~ George Eliot
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